you were taken
one day
and
you were taken
the next day
you took
you looked
and wished
it hurt but it was funny,
maybe
you could hallucinate
you were rubbed
and / your skin
moved back and forth and leaked
the smell made you horny
or too deep
and when you woke up
and the sand
brought thick, despairing dreams
when you showered
and / you saw clouds
and when you closed your eyes
and / you saw clouds painted
on a ceiling of sky blue
helpless and angry
and later
the water
was pink
disgusting and sad
12.5.09
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damn
better than the original i'd say
damn
feel embarrassed, was raised by a salesman father and by little league coaches to never fucking lose
i like your new layout, it is better than the old one
Thanks, I was worried it was too busy.
It's not better than the original, but that means you owe me one. Should I remix tao lin?
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