12.5.09

remix bomb: zach 0, michael 2

you were taken
one day

and

you were taken
the next day

you took
you looked

and wished
it hurt but it was funny,

maybe
you could hallucinate

you were rubbed
and / your skin
moved back and forth and leaked

the smell made you horny
or too deep

and when you woke up
and the sand
brought thick, despairing dreams
when you showered

and / you saw clouds
and when you closed your eyes
and / you saw clouds painted

on a ceiling of sky blue
helpless and angry

and later
the water
was pink
disgusting and sad

3 comments:

X said...

damn

better than the original i'd say

damn

feel embarrassed, was raised by a salesman father and by little league coaches to never fucking lose

X said...

i like your new layout, it is better than the old one

Michael Hessel-Mial said...

Thanks, I was worried it was too busy.

It's not better than the original, but that means you owe me one. Should I remix tao lin?